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My Hometown Mount Maanshan My hometown is Mount Maanshan. Have you ever been there? Mount Maanshan is very famous for its beautiful scenery, excellent climate and long history. Mount Maanshan stands on the south bank of the Changjiang River and the east of Anhui Province. It has many nice scenic spots,Thousands of people from other parts of China and foreign countries come here every year, especially in summer. Summer on Mount Maanshan is very cool. It can be called a huge natural air-c Winter here is nice, too. Heavy snow falls every year. I want to say that&Mount Maanshan in summer is green like a clear fountain, and in winter is white like a white jade.& I'm sure you will have a wonderful time in my hometown.. Mount Maanshan.二 My home is in a town. It lies in the east of Zhejiang near the East SeA．It has a population of fifty thousand. Our town is in the south of our county.The Ease Sea is to the east of the town. To the south is flat land. Mountains are on the west. And a river runs from north to south in the west of my town.The weather here is good. It is not so cold in winter or so hot in summer. So the sea near my town is full of all sorts of fish. The fishermen of my home town are all living a happy life三Beijing is aworld-famous city with a great number of places of interests. Such as the GreatWall the Summer Palace the Forbidden City etc. Here in my hometown we alsohave some great places for sightseeing. Shi Du is a good place to travel. It’s verybeautiful. It’s a river valley of Tai-hang Mountains. It’s warm in winter andcool in summer. You can drivebamboo rafts in the river and play bungee jumping from the high cliff of Qi LinMountain. What a wonderful place! If you are interested in history and culture you canvisit Zhou Kou Dian. You can find a lot of interesting facts about Peking Man. People excavatefrom the year 1921 to the year 1929.They find a lot of things. They help us to know more about our ancestor. It opens form 8:30 a.m. to 16:30 p.m. every day. And thetickets there are not expensive only 30 Yuan for adults and 15 for studentsand children.After all theseexciting items you can enjoy outdoor delicious barbecue. Apart from travelingsites as a local Fang Shan girl I think daily life in my hometown is verymodern and convenient too. You must know that there are lots of large shoppingmalls in Xi Dan. Actually we also have great malls for shopping in Fang Shan.There is a large Carrefour Supermarket where we buy all our daily necessitiessuch as dairy eggs fruit vegetables all kinds of meat and of coursevarious snacks. If we need to buy new clothes we can go to Hua Guan. It’s thelargest department store in Fang Shan selling a variety of clothing andaccessories. There are lots of fine restaurants on its first floor too. There is a supermarket near my home. It’s not big but verynice. I usually buy fruit in that supermarket. Do you know Outlet Store? It’s avery big shopping mall. You can buy many brand cloth there. Last time I boughta shirt in a big brand—Nike. When we feeltired after hours of shopping we usually go and find some yummy food to getcharged.The foods inOutlet Store are delicious. In Fang Shan the most delicious food is the roastduck.Transportationin Fang Shan has been developing fast in recent years. People used to drivecars or take buses to work or to school. But now we have a much more convenientchoice —— the subway Fang Shan Line. It saves lots of time for those who livein Fang Shan and work downtown. We all feel very happy. Frankly speaking but myhometown has a lot of deficiency. On one hand I can only watch movies in the movie theatre. If I want to go to the amusementpark or zoo I must go to downtown. It’s very inconvenient. On the other hand the weatheris very bad. Sometimes it hazes every day. It is not good for our healthy.All in all my hometown may not be the best or themost famous district in Beijing. But it’s the place where I was born where Igrow and where I’ll like forever. I believe that it can become better andbetter. If possible I sincerely hope that you can visit my hometown. Come andappreciate the beautiful scenery enjoy the delicious food. I’ll be very happyto be your guide.请选择
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出门在外也不愁求点评这篇作文青春的誓言不积小流无以成江河,不积跬步无以至千里.——题记 复兴中华,从我做起,中华的命运与我们息息相连.爱国是义无反顾的抉择,是不卑不亢的不畏,爱国是以天下为已_百度作业帮
求点评这篇作文青春的誓言不积小流无以成江河,不积跬步无以至千里.——题记 复兴中华,从我做起,中华的命运与我们息息相连.爱国是义无反顾的抉择,是不卑不亢的不畏,爱国是以天下为已任的胸襟,是前赴后继的执着.中华儿女无畏的爱国精神,使祖国有了许多骄人的成就.中国能研制成“两弹一星”,西方人总感到不可思议.而这不可思议的成果,正是因为邓稼先义无返顾的执着.邓稼先通过赴美考试进入普渡大学后很快拿到了博士学位,可他毫不犹豫的舍弃了美国优越的生活,回到了朝思暮想祖国.当他面对一穷二白,百废待兴的祖国时,他发出这样誓言：“我要把一生奉献给我的中国母亲,为她的复兴倾尽我的一切.”他说到也做到了.回到祖国后,他参加了”两弹一星”的研究,他不光在实验室里费尽心血,还来到大漠戈壁上做实验,没有了大漠孤烟直,没有了长河落日圆,只剩飞沙走石,黄沙漫天.这是何等艰难困苦!可他就是在这黄沙漫天下,坚持了十几年,终于我国第一颗原子弹横空出世,我国第一颗氢弹威震山河!邓稼先从自己做起,振兴了中华,实现了自己当初立下的誓言.邓稼先用他的义无反顾,改变了中华的命运.还有一群人,他们用那前赴后继的执着,诠释了自己生命的意义,也成就了中华的崛起,他们就是黄花岗七十二烈士.为了推翻腐败无能的清王朝,他们义无反顾地走向了革命的道路.虽然知道此次有去无回,可他们明白广州起义的意义,就算起义不成功,他们的流血,也会唤醒同胞们的觉醒.战友们一个个倒下,可他们来不及悲伤,他们还要继续拼杀,烈士们心中有着坚定的信念：我死国生,我死犹荣.壮士一去不复还,可烈士们用自己前赴后继的执着,为中华日后复兴之路,打好了坚实的基础.他们每一个人,都在用自己的力量,完成当初立下的誓言——从自己做起,振兴中华.我也想以青春的名义,对我亲爱的祖国发出这样的誓言——振兴中华.我有个梦想就是当老师.大家都说老师培育着祖国的栋梁,我却觉得老师就是祖国的栋梁.老师的重要,不在于教大道理,而在于他们在洁白如纸的孩子们的心灵上,写下永不磨灭的痕迹,这痕迹往往影响孩子们一生.我想用我的青春给孩子们一个未来,给祖国一个未来.帮孩子们圆梦,帮祖国圆梦.我的志向既在此,就定会为此不懈奋斗,为振兴中华不懈奋斗.少年不展风云志,空负天生八尺躯.我会从自己做起,以此报效祖国,振兴中华,实现我用青春的名义发出的誓言.一粒种子,可以无声无息地在泥土里腐烂,也可以长成参天的大树；一块铀铁,可以平庸无奇地在石头里沉睡,也可以迸发出惊天动地的力量.我们自己就是种子,是铀铁.“不积小流无以成江河,不积跬步无以至千里”,用你我的青春立下坚定的誓言——复兴中华从自己做起,只有才能更好地改变整个民族的命运.我相信：只要每个人都有坚挺的脊梁,只要每个人心中都有座长城,有推不倒的城墙,我们就能用自己的双手战胜一切困难,创造出更加灿烂辉煌的明天.在不久的将来,我们祖国一定会以更加雄伟的姿态屹立在世界的东方.
遣词造句什么的都还不错的主要是前四个自然段和后三个自然段之间缺乏逻辑联系,没有一个统一的中心.前面说的一直和青春这个关键词没啥关系,也就是跑题,或者至少可以说是选材不当.第五第六自然段算是切题了,最后一段又和青春没关系了整体感觉就是,散头尾改一改,换几个着重说青春的素材可能会好一些.或者直接把题目改成振兴中华为关键词的也可以,毕竟你这几乎全篇都是在说振兴中华
嗯。。。。我知道这篇作文不咋样，但也没法改了，要那种放到书上的评语，能找些优点吗？从内容，结构，篇幅，修辞。
优点也好说啊
选题深刻，内容丰富，素材充实，辞藻华丽，多种修辞方法交替使用，显示作者有较好的写作技巧和较深的写作功底。这不都是优点嘛
可惜的是结构上没办法给你找优点，毕竟这篇文章多少还是有点跑题的。。。
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求 这篇作文的评论 100字左右,：举手之劳也是一种美德船上的漏洞本不属于漆工约定工作范围,只要把油漆漆好了,任务就算是已经完成,可是漆工却顺便将船上的漏洞补好,就是这么一个不经意的“举手之劳”,却避免了一场重大事故的发生.看完此则故事,令人想到另一则故事,一个大雨瞬间倾泻而下的午后,一位浑身湿淋淋的老妇,步履蹒跚地走进费城百货商店.看着她那狼狈的姿态和简朴的衣裙,所有的售货员都对她视而不见.这时走出一位小伙子走进里间,搬出一把椅子.“夫人,不必为难,坐在椅子上休息就是了.”这个年轻人叫菲利,老妇人就是美国亿万富翁“钢铁大王”卡内基的母亲.后来菲利来到卡内基公司,以他一贯的诚实和诚恳,成为“钢铁大王”的左膀右臂.菲利的举手之劳,成就了他的“扫天下”的伟业.两个故事虽说不同,但是结果都不同寻常.举手之劳无须付出多大的代价,也无须多大的成本,一举手,一抬足就可以做好,却给他人和社会带来意料不到的好的效果.在现实生活中：坐公交不少人给急需的人员让座;看到老人跌倒顺手把其扶起来;公共场所顺手关灯,关闭水龙头等并不少见,举手之劳有的是一种传统习惯,有的则是要细心的观察,举手之劳看似简单,但却反映出一种内心的美德.与惊天动地的奇迹相比,举手之劳微不足道,但由小见大,与微之外见精神,古人云：“不积跬步,无以至千里”,一个人要成功,不仅要干大事,还要从小事做起,不仅要做好份内的事,而且还得做好份外的事,细节决定成败,只有注意细节的人,才能全心投入,对待工作严谨认真,习惯举手之劳之人,才是胸怀宽大,能替他人所想,把他人放在心上的人,社会需要温暖,人与人之间需要真诚,人人都献出一点爱,都来点举手之劳,社会发展将更美好.船主给漆工送了一大笔钱,其意不仅是金钱,而是一种报恩,菲利的举手之劳,成就了其“扫天下”的伟业.诚然,大凡举手之劳者都不图回报,但是让人铭刻在心,此种回报是意想不到,比起金钱更珍贵.举手之劳人人可做,但愿社会有更多的此类漆工,同时也希望得到帮助者能象船主那样,知书达理,给予爱心者以奖励,共同营造“我爱人人,人人爱我”的良好氛围.
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The financial accelerator in an estimated New Keynesian model. 作者:Christensen, Ian1
来源:Review of Economic D Jan2008, Vol. 11 Issue 1, p155-178, 24p
文献类型:Article
主题语:*ECONOMIC activity
*BUSINESS conditions
*BUSINESS cycles
*ECONOMICS
作者提供的关键字:E37
摘要:Abstract: This paper estimates and simulates a sticky-price dynamic stochastic general-equilibrium model with a financial accelerator, à la Bernanke et al. [Bernanke, B., Gertler, M., Gilchrist, S., 1999. The financial accelerator in a quantitative business cycle framework. In: Handbook of Macroeconomics. North-Holland, Amsterdam], to assess the importance of the financial accelerator mechanism in fitting the data and its role in the amplification and propagation of transitory shocks. Structural parameters of two models, one with and one without a financial accelerator, are estimated using a maximum-likelihood procedure and post-1979 US data. The estimation and simulation results provide quantitative evidence in favor of the financial-accelerator model. The model without a financial accelerator is statistically rejected in favor of a model with it. The presence of the financial accelerator amplifies and propagates the effects of demand shocks on investment, but it dampens those of supply shocks. However, we find that the importance of the financial accelerator for output fluctuations is relatively minor. [Copyright &y& Elsevier]
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作者单位:1Monetary and Financial Analysis Department, Bank of Canada, Canada
2International Department, Bank of Canada. 234 Wellington Street, Ottawa, ON K1A 0G9, Canada
DOI:10.1016/j.red.
数据库: Business Source Premier
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